Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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of

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professional

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can earn

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amount of money as

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to other most important

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on the other hand

people believe it is

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not fair

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I am inclined towards the former view but both

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aspects shall be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. Let discuss in details there are multifarious factors successful athlete get a great amount of deal.The

first

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is,they spend more hours and hours

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more

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practice

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result

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many types of injurious during the

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field and during that have a more problem to happen serious injury.

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to perform

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international games

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, Olympic held on after 6

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at a one

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and

sports

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performance

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in Olympic only 4to10

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so only for that performance they

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hard work and sacrifices get

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deal.

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individuals

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of months without their family

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it

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impact

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in their personal life. On the different side, some reasons it is unfair to pay more for

sports

person

.The primary factor is, in today’s era in all field

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rocket up

at day by day , so many

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the people having a good talent they are

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not getting a similar platform so owing to

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a negative image in all individual mind as considered.What is more,some

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due to some personal issue good talented

individuals

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right platform ,

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person

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are not belong

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good family so they

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manage their fees of professional institutes and being a good

sports

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sportsperson

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person

want to manage proper physical diet so some

time

this

is

also

lacking. To conclude,it’s very important to

individuals

get paid

off

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their hard work.

However

if in another field a

person

doing great snd they put their all effort so, it’s

also

important they

also

get

good

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amount of money.