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These days many people live or work overseas in a different country than they were born in. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and then give your own opinion.

#people #work #country
In recent
year
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,
cost
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 of living has become a major challenge people face.
this
 has made the increase of
persons
to
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migrate from one
country
 to another in search of greener pastures.
Also
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 so many
persons
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believe
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belive
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believe
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 that
traveling
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travelling
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 overseas is the best option for better growth of income and survival. Below are the
followig
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following
 reasons or advantages while most
persons
 move from one
country
 and another for
setllement
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settlement
 and work
Firstly
, you will agree with me that,
for
example
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 in
nigeria
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Nigeria
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 the
cost
 of living is very high
compaired
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compared
 to the income received from their
work place
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workplace
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,
therefore
this
 has contributed to the fact that majority of the people born in
nigeria
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Nigeria
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 prefers to travel outside the
country
 for a better job and pay. these days
alot
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a lot
 of
persons
 can hardly feed and afford a better
accomodation
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accommodation
 and live a better life.
secondly
, another advantage is the fact that the value of
nigerian
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Nigerian
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 currency is so poor,
compaired
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compared
 to that of the united states.The ratio has a very big gap without
comparisim
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comparison
.
for
example
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 when you purchase an
iteam
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item
 from
oversea
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overseas
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 it is cheaper than buying it in
nigeria
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Nigeria
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 outside the
cost
 of
shiping
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shipping
 it. For the disadvantage, you will
totaly
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totally
 agree with me that most foods which you could easily get
in
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at
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 a low
cost
 while in
african
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African
Africa
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 are very high in
cost
 and can not get them handy, it is very difficult to get them, Another disadvantage is the climate, the weather outside the
country
 is always very cold, and lots of
persons
 that
has
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have
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migratted
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migrated
 finds it very hard to adapt
in
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to
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 their new
enviroment
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environment
. In conclusion, despite the
disadvantages
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,disadvantages
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 the advantages
takes
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 a better place than the disadvantages. movement from one
country
 to another is best because it helps us save
have
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 a better place to work and live right.
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