Some people think that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in order to be successful at school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Many people feel that giving

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is not necessary for children.

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others think that it will be helpful to become a successful student in school. In

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essay I will discuss why they should provide

homework

everyday

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and if they did not do

this

what causes will

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them in future.

Nowdays

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educational institutes are too much serious about

homewrok

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homework

and classwork. Most the

the

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teachers forced their pupils to did

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homework

at school. But it is not a good idea. There are lots of people

supported

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who supported

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kids

refreshness

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refreshed

freshness

refreshes

. Like they did not complete

homework

regularly. Because they think that, in their living space

childen

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children

only play with siblings or doing their hobby. It will be much more helpful for

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their

brain development. Another reason is, it is not always true that daily giving

homework

will

makes

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a learner more

skillful

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For example

, one of my

friend

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did not

compelete

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complete

hometask

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home task

fo particular subject but now he is

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apply

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become most successful

On the other hand

, many

exparts

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experts

suggest that children should not provide their

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daily task

daily tasks

and show to the

instractor

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instructor

. It is true that

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homework

is helpful to

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reach

enrich

knowledge productively. Because when any instructor

work

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on classroom

particular

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subject by

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students can learn many things and

instructor

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the instructor

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always prefer to give lots of

practice

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practise

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test for solving at

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home

room

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. It is interesting to solve

homework

at the same time

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difficult

dificult

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. If any kids did

homework

regulary

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regularly

he/she can study in good

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instruction

Moreover

, some people are very successful by doing

this

type of work. I

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it can

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change

anytime.

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, one of my

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school

friens

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friends

friend

did all

kind

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homework

and

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after

competely

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school he could relieve . In conclusion,

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personally believe giving

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very

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good

things

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for kids because

thay

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they

can enjoy by doing

this

and

besides

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this

activity will help them for better

fututr

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future

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