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All over the world scientists are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

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Being overweight can be considered
as
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serious
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 health issue and eventually can turn into
major
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 disease
for
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 example, heart attack or high
cholestrol
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cholesterol
. As per the recent study, there is a 20% increase in patients suffering from illnesses which are caused due to obesity Nowadays, a large number of
people
 are leading a sedentary lifestyle which is considered as one of the major reasons for it. Notwithstanding, technological advancement
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 have its negative impact as we can notice
people
 getting fatter in urban areas as compared to rural.
For example
, city
people
 don't walk much and spent long working hours on the computer and
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 gain more weight
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 during
pendemic
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pandemic
pandemics
endemic
. Social media
also
 contributes to
this
 cause as
people
 do get fascinated by misleading ads on food-related items like fitness drinks which is nothing but sugar ,
for example
,milo.
Such
 unhealthy eating habits especially among the younger generation is a serious matter which needs to be tackled. Many of us may not be aware that it contains 80% sugar which is not healthy at all. But 90% of parents believe that Milo is a healthy drink.
Likewise
, there are many other products consuming which on daily basis can be harmful. I believe
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 we all should play an integral part in creating and spreading health awareness together with fitness authorities.
Firstly
, the government should identify unhealthy products and ban their supply.
Secondly
 , they should promote jogging or walk by building more parks or gyms within residential vicinity ,
also
 they should encourage cooperate to organise health events and motivate employees to participate in
such
 activities. With these initiatives , we should be able to give a better ecosystem to our society and help to keep the health-check control.
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