Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and will use up the world’s resources. Do you agree or disagree?

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Advances in technology have resulted in cheaper flying tickets

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an increase in air travel but

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has a knock-on effect on the environment with many environmentalists struggling to cope with

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. Many people enjoy the benefits provided by

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as they save time.

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, there are some people who claim that flying should be banned due to the adverse effects it has on the environment and I firmly agree with

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statement.

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essay tends to discuss the reasons for my viewpoint.

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airplanes

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are responsible for contaminating the atmosphere.

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, a rent report in my country established that aeroplanes contribute to 40% of global warming.

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is because burning jet fuel releases a vast amount of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. Carbon dioxide is a greenhouse gas

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in turn traps heat in the atmosphere

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making it the primary contributor to global warming and climate change.

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, the screeching noise of tyres and

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of the engine

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sound

pollution

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makes it evident that

airplanes

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account for

pollution

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, aeroplanes exhaust natural resources.

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, planes are made up of 80% aluminium, so excessive production of

aircrafts

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uses up aluminium ores.

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the

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apply

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aviation fuel

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constitute

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of hydrocarbons, overuse leads to

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the exhaustion

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of fossil fuel reserves.

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, the world's production of hydrocarbon will soon decline.

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it becomes apparent that

airplanes

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are one of the root causes for the depletion of

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the world's

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resources. To conclude,

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air travel is the most convenient form of journey, the after-effects it has on the environment is detrimental.

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, I agree that restricting flying will curb

pollution

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