Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Many people argued that it is
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possible
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to be both economically
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successful
and have a clean
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environment
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totally go for it. The reason will be express in the upcoming paragraphs. To start off with, we have to seek
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as
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prime example because of its strong
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due to sea trade and clean
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environment
due to reinforcement of the
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environmental
laws. And the key similarities that
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found in clean
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metropolitan
cities are how the authorities take keeping the
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environment
clean as a serious task and never let the offender go off easily as a saying goes "no men above the law".
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small act of go will by not throwing the rubbish on the
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side walk
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or not smoking in the public area contribute to the development of the
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.
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; throwing the already
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gum on the pavement would not only dirty that area but the whole
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so the
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government
must use the tax in order to clean the mess in which those tax money can be
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in education, health and many more.
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by doing our part in keeping the city clean we are lowering the health risk like throwing food waste into the water body could dump down the water and create
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ground for
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which can cause malaria and many more diseases which can potentially harm the citizen. For
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country
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like the UK which
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healthcare is free for the people too many admission into the hospital with
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disease which is easily preventable is not good for the
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government
because we can use
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to invest
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elsewhere To
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conclude
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am a strong believer that it is possible for the
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to be both clean and strong and
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successful
in
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of economic and other sectors.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economically successful
  • Clean environment
  • Sustainable practices
  • Green technologies
  • Eco-tourism
  • Healthier workforce
  • Healthcare costs
  • Short-term economic growth
  • Profit over environment
  • Heavy industries
  • Developing countries
  • Sacrifice
  • Economic development
  • Transitioning
  • Balance
  • Sustainable development
  • International cooperation
  • Incentivize
  • Eco-friendly business practices
  • Investment in education
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