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Write about the following topic: Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many
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 die out annually. It is argued by some individuals that
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 is not crucial as life will be comfortable if there are few
languages
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 in the world. I do not agree with
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 notion as it may be convenient regarding the ways we communicate
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 but at the cost of rich cultural values. The linguistic heritage of each nation dictates the way any society thrive with rich cultural values, which is not possible in a foreign
language
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.
Languages
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 spoken locally affords an opportunity for the transfer of the traditional methods of living together.
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, the Tamil
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 spoken in India keep the society in a well-connected bond of love and affection, which will fade away if the
language
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 is lost to a new
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.
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, it is difficult to pass values in a foreign
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 to offspring, which will be detrimental to any culture.
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, a reduction in the number of
languages
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 spoken may lead to a way of communication. It is believed that
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 trend will make communication easy by removing
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 barrier.
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, when a person goes abroad he will not be needing to learn a foreign
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 if he speaks the same
language
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.
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,
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 will make things easy for everyone,
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, the cost society has to pay in the form of loss in culture would be significant.
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, the volume of history written in a certain
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 will be on the verge of extinction, if that
language
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 dies out. In conclusion, fewer
languages
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 may make it easy to communicate but
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 will be at the expense of loss in cultural value and rich historical facts.
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