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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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In recent years staying single increases a lot throughout the world. Some people strongly agreed
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 lifestyle helps to survive with minimum financial earnings and others debate it leads to loneliness , mental illnesses. In the below discussion we are going to discuss both advantages and disadvantages.
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, the younger generation looking for more privacy in their personal life and which leads to stayed them far from family in private bedrooms. Which helps them to survive with minimum earnings and allow more private life. There is no one to stop or monitor. So, they can do whatever they want. It helps them to live their own passion. One of the examples to support
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 point is, if someone wants nightlife it is difficult when they live with another person it may itch in your brain early morning doorbell may disturb others and it can achieve when they stay alone.
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 kind of lifestyle leads to loneliness and mental health issues for stayed alone humans. If there was a difficult situation that needs someone attention is not possible immediately. For ,example if they met with an accident and need any support
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 it is difficult to get family or friends. Another example , if they need any immediate support to share their personal emotions it is always good to live with others. As described above there were both advantages and disadvantages with the above lifestyle. In my opinion
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 of leading single life it's always better to stay together with someone.
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