You noticed that an article you just read on a popular international travel blog contained some incorrect information about the town where you live. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter • correct what the article got wrong • explain why it is important for the magazine to report things accurately • say what you think the magazine should do about this situation You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to bring some concerns to your attention regarding an article you published on your travel blog

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month, which contains some incorrect information about my hometown. You mentioned that Montreal does not have a spot where you can swim and sunbathe, but we have a few lakes where you can

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and swim safely.

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, Montreal has great weather conditions during the summer, enabling people to go outside and hang out with their friends.

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, in the article, it is described as an arctic city, which is always cloudy and does not have sunshine. These misinformations lead a significant number of tourists to change their minds to go on a holiday to another country,

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Montreal would face a decrease in

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income. Considering

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situation, I kindly request that the changes be made to your blog about my hometown. I would really appreciate it if you could remove

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article and publish a new one with corrected information. Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully. Ibrahim

mcdonaman

Aug 3, 2026

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Give more clear facts. For example, name one lake or beach and say that summer is warm and sunny. This will make your points stronger.

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Use more natural words: say "tourism income", not "touristic's income". Also, say "go on holiday" or "choose another place", not "go on a holiday to another country".

coherence and cohesion

Put each main point in its own paragraph: one for wrong facts, one for why this matters, and one for what you want the blog to do.

coherence and cohesion

Use simple link words in a clear way: "First", "Also", "Because of this", and "Finally". Do not use a semicolon after "as a result".

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You answer all three parts: you say what is wrong, why it matters, and what the blog should do.

coherence and cohesion

Your letter has a clear start, body, and end. The greeting and closing are good.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

190 words

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