Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, there has been lots of discussion about the rising rate of traffic accidents.

As a result

, some hold the opinion that harsher

punishments

for

drivers

are the key measure to solve

this

situation;

however

, many individuals argue that other methods should be employed and emphasized. In my view, considering other approaches would result better. On one hand, it is argued that by imposing stricter

punishments

,

drivers

will be discouraged to drive carelessly. These

punishments

can include heavier fines, license suspension and even prison for offender

drivers

.

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may be effective to obligate

drivers

to observe the rules, but

this

cannot completely prevent

drivers

from accidents;

for instance

, when a drunk driver experiences a crash, the driver may not be lucky enough to survive in order to be penalized in future.

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is not a wise decision to fine the

drivers

heavily while the price of

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is even more than the price of the vehicle maintenance.

On the other hand

, the opinion of applying other methods is held. I believe that enhancement of roads safety would probably

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outcome on reduction of the accidents rate.There are several approaches that can be used in order to boost

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roads safety,

to begin

with, awarding good

drivers

,

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award can be given to careful

drivers

in many ways,

for example

, safe

drivers

that have not violated any traffic rules

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will receive a discount on their tax.

Secondly

, governments can invest money in widening roads or setting more signposts.

This

approach can save many lives. In conclusion,

although

imposing harsher

punishments

may discourage

drivers

to contravene the traffic rules, but I’m on the other opinion which is employing other methods.