Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, there has been lots of discussion about the rising rate of traffic accidents.

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, some hold the opinion that harsher

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for

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are the key measure to solve

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situation;

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, many individuals argue that other methods should be employed and emphasized. In my view, considering other approaches would result better. On one hand, it is argued that by imposing stricter

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,

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will be discouraged to drive carelessly. These

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can include heavier fines, license suspension and even prison for offender

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.

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manners

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may be effective to obligate

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to observe the rules, but

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cannot completely prevent

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from accidents;

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, when a drunk driver experiences a crash, the driver may not be lucky enough to survive in order to be penalized in future.

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is not a wise decision to fine the

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heavily while the price of

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is even more than the price of the vehicle maintenance.

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, the opinion of applying other methods is held. I believe that enhancement of roads safety would probably

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outcome on reduction of the accidents rate.There are several approaches that can be used in order to boost

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roads safety,

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with, awarding good

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,

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award can be given to careful

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in many ways,

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, safe

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that have not violated any traffic rules

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will receive a discount on their tax.

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, governments can invest money in widening roads or setting more signposts.

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approach can save many lives. In conclusion,

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imposing harsher

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may discourage

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to contravene the traffic rules, but I’m on the other opinion which is employing other methods.