Many museums charge for admission, while others are free. Do you think the advantage of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantage ?

Some

of

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museums

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the museums

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are free to

visit

while many of them impose

entry

fees

. In my opinion, the benefits of imposing entrance

fees

are far outweigh

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the drawbacks. There are some downsides

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imposing

entry

tickets to

museums

.

To begin

with, many schools sponsor students to

visit

galleries and

museums

as a part of their curriculum or research assignments ;

therefore

, if the

museums

are not free, fewer students encourage to

visit

them and get to know

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their country’s history.

Secondly

, there are some people in some developing countries who have not ever seen any museum or galleries due to financial problems as they have more important needs to be met than visiting

such

these

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historical sites. These are the nation’s heritage, pride and the sign of their civilization, so all citizens from all income groups have

right

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to

visit

their history for no

costs

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.

On the other hand

, imposing

entry

fees

bring about many

merrits

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merits

.

Firstly

,

museums

are very important and known as

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significant tourist

destinations

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and annually attract many visitors and international tourists to the country ;

hence

, these are one of the main sources of revenue . As for the

second

plus point, these ancient works of art or objects need to be restored over time;

thus

,

this

money can be used for repair, innovation, and maintenance costs,

also

it is not surprising that more one pays for visiting something, the more they respect to it, so they will behave more carefully while they are visiting these places.

In addition

, When ticket

fees

are applied, only the art-lovers and history fans come and pay to

visit

these sites;

as a result

, not only does overcrowding probably never happen, but

also

they can

visit

and enjoy their short tour in peace with no distractions. In conclusion;

however

, visiting historical places, galleries, and

museums

with no costs have some merits, the advantages of applying

entry

fees

are considerably undeniable