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Young people have attitude and ideas different from that of their parents and grandparents. How do these attitudes differ between young people and their parents and grandparents? In your opinion, do you think it would cause problems?

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Over the past few decades, our generation gap has increased exponentially due to paradigm
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 in culture and after
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 of technological advancement. It has
significant
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 impact on
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 process of teenagers which has created differences with
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the older
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 generation.
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these variations and
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 impact. On one hand, teens nowadays are breaking
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 ceiling and at
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 young age becoming
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an entrepreneur
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entrepreneur
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entrepreneurs
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.
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 , Oyo CEO is one of the youngest
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 at the age
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 and demonstrated exceptional leadership skills. While
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this
 can be considered as a positive change in mindset and outlook which may not have
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 during older days as adults usually follow the herd mentality of growing organically in
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 world. On on other hand, if we discuss
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emotional intelligence where our teenagers mostly
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as
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 they tend to rebel with
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 value system.
This
 causes one of the major differences among both
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generations which is resulting in breakups among couples, failed marriages and broken families. These social problems
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 to the upbringing of kids during
thier
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their
 tender age.
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 , in
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 divorce is very common and
teeagers
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teenagers
 start living on
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their
 own as early as 15. As per
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 study,
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a child
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child
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children
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 brought up in
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enviroment
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environment
environments
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 in poor educational outcomes. In my opinion, we should learn older generations about
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 and values of being a great human and
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align
 our thought with them.
Although
 we may agree to disagree
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we should not ignore
thier
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their
 suggestions and try to follow
thier
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their
this
 advice.
Also
, we try to make them understand our viewpoint in trying things in a new way and work together with them to create a new world.
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