You recently want to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer, In your letter say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities
Dear Sara,
I'm writing to thank you for your great demonstration
last
night at the concert hall.
I hope this
letter finds you healthy and wealthy. I should express my excitement about your performances. Your concert has had an intense impact on the majority of the people. I believe there is no one like you who manages to creates
a positive atmosphere among her audiences during her casting.
Let me explain more about myself. I have been singing since I was 9, and your songs were always encouraging for me. Wrong verb form
create
Moreover
, I applied for the ABC Art Collage this
year to become a great performer like you.
It would be great if you could help me to become a good artist like you one day. I believe that your advices
can have an intense impact on me. Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
Furthermore
, you could pave my way by mentioning the unpredictable problems during this
journey.
I hope you will consider my situation favorably
.
Best regards
AliChange the spelling
favourably
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph embodies a distinct idea and transitions smoothly from one to the next for better flow and clarity.
Task Achievement
Include specific examples from the concert when describing your feelings about the singer's performance to enhance your task response.
Language Accuracy
Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and correct use of phrases such as 'your advices,' which should be 'your advice' (advice is uncountable in this context).