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Many people join distance-learning programmes and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The given maps depict the development of Stokeford
village
 from 1930 to 2010. Overall, the
village
 shown on the maps modernized and developed over the period given, with the number of residential dwellings increasing. One of the most salient features is the agricultural features had disappeared completely by 2010. In 1930, the large area of the
village
 were arable lands…. In terms of the road layout, two new roads have been constructed in the north of the
village
 with new housing on both sides of each of them, which necessitated the demolition of shops on the left-hand side of the main road, along with farmland to the east of the
village
.
Moreover
, an array of houses have been erected along both sides of the main road. The residential accommodation underwent
further
 changes with the removal of gardens which had large houses on the right side of the map. The primary school opposite of the post office had expanded with two more buildings behind the main one. ………
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