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Manypeople believe that the human society has into a throw-away society, which is filled with plastic bags and rubbish. What are the causes and solutions?

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It is a human
tendancy
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tendency
 to throw out the things after usage especially polythene and rubbish.
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 , due to
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 development human society
known
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 as
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throw
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a throw
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 away society .
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 essay will discuss the major cause which is
lack
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a lack
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 of
disposing
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knowledge
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 along with
solution
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 the prominent one is government action that helps to mitigate
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 problem . Commencing with the principle reason, as in some societies
people
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 do not have
knowledge
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 about
disposing
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 methods they put
variety
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a variety
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 of
garbage
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 in one type of dustbin .
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 , it is generally seen that
people
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 in
rural
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the rural
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area
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 always
disposed
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 all
type
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types
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 of
garbage
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 in one place whether it is household
garbage
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 or plastic products because they do not have proper
knowledge
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 about the impacts and
disposing
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criterias
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criteria
, Thereby ,
people
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 freely dispose
everything
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of everything
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 before concerning its reuses. Turning to the possible solutions,
government
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the government
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 initiative helps to eradicate
this
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 problem by making some
rule
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 and regulations as it governance duty to aware
those
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of those
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 who have no information regarding
disposing
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 methods to put rubbish and plastic products in different dustbins so ,
this
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 material is used in a productive manner .
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the municipal
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 corporation
have
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 to organise some campus in
remote
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 area to aware the individuals of
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 area to use different dustbins for different purposes as it
help
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 to reduce the
garbage
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 and maintain
healthy
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a healthy
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 environment.
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 responsibility of the officials to
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create
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creat
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create
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safe
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a safe
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 atmosphere by
awaring
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awarding
people
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 . In conclusion , it can be said that
garbage
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 is increased up to great extent because of the
people
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habbits
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habits
 of throwing ill-mannerly that can be solved only by putting some efforts to gave
knowledge
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 to unaware once .
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