Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important enviromental problems.

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Extinction of species is the most horrendous crime

humanity

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is responsible for, and

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future generations will hold us responsible for it. Since the dawn of Homo Sapiens, or since when we got the ability to think much better than all the other

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, and since when no animal could threaten

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humans

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have started to think

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as the owners of the planet. And

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, the human started to think that it owned all the flora and fauna too. Since industrialisation,

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has cut down trillions of hectares of forest for industries

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as paper, furniture, industrial products and so on. The rate of deforestation far supersedes the rate of forestation and

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the amount of land covered by forests has exponentially decreased over the past 200 years.

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decrement of

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area has

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lead to increased

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green-house

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gases, hiked rates of land, overpopulation, loss of quality of life of indigenous people and a lot of other unlikeable things. But the true torment of

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comes via its treatment of

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. Especially the

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which hone some special physical properties which

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think has value, like the tusks of elephants and walruses, or the fur of many fur-bearing

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like bears,

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, seals etc. Hunting for

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has

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lead to

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the extinction

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of many species by the hands of

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, like mammoths, dodos, sea-cows and a lot more. But

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is not the whole extent of deterioration caused by

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humans

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, by virtue of cutting trees, have induced global warming, which increases

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, disrupts climate and wind patterns, and

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in-turn

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causes many endemic species to go extinct. Global warming is a result of multiple sources, i.e. cutting down of trees which convert

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gases to oxygen, and the global usage of fuels

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emit

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gases after combustion.

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due to overpopulation and dumping of sewage into oceans, the ocean floor is lined with non-biodegradable plastic which harms the oceanic life in extensive ways.

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is how the various environmental problems caused by

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affect flora, fauna and most importantly our home planet.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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347 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
extinction
habitat loss
ecosystem
food chain
imbalance
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climate change
pollution
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