Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some argue that having a university

degree

is more promising to land a good career whereas some presume that

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experience

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work

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a better way. Despite the fact that both a

degree

and

work

experience

are crucial, I believe that having a tertiary certification can attribute to a more secure future. Having a graduate

degree

has several benefits in today’s highly competitive

job

market.

First

of all, a

degree

is evidence of an individual’s hard

work

and accomplishment. It is

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accreditation that shows that a person has the necessary expertise to apply to their fields of interest.

Secondly

, a

degree

is

also

regarded as high social status. Since a lot of investments

such

as persistence and intelligence were committed, people look up to graduates. For these reasons, companies are more willing to offer higher roles and pay to someone with a certificate.

On the contrary

, it is undeniable that

experience

plays a key role in the field. Years of knowledge and skills obtained in the field can shape a person into a professional without having to invest many years for

education

.

For example

, a mechanic

job

is one

which

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one cannot handle without fully knowing each part of the equipment.

Hence

, in

such

delicate fields, fresh graduates could have

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possibilities than those with accumulated

work

. In my perspective, though

work

experience

is imperative to acquire a good

job

, it is more likely for a person with higher

education

to be given the vacancy as well as

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higher pay and position. The justification for

this

is that those without certified qualifications are unable to prove their competence whereas universities offer a lifetime valid certification with details of

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. To sum up, field

experience

eliminates time investment in

education

and contributes to building skills,

however

, having a

degree

gives more opportunities and incentives in the

job

market.

Thus

, I agree with the notion that attaining higher

education

offers more promises and stability in

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