People can use a mobile phones to answer work and home calls at any place or seven days a week. Do you think there are more negative or positive effects on both individuals and society.
It is true that in
this
era individuals are able to attend calls with their cell
phones
at every place and time
to answer professional and personal calls. I personally believe that negative effects
outwieght
the positive Correct your spelling
outweigh
outweighed
outweighs
effects
.
To commence with, cell
phones
play crucial
role in Add an article
a crucial
the
emergency situations. Correct article usage
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In other words
, sometime
if someone Replace the word
sometimes
get
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gets
stucked
in a problem Correct your spelling
stuck
for
example, accidents, health problems. So, they can use their mobile Add the comma(s)
,for
phones
to make calls to get instant help from the hospitals or family members. Hence
, invention
of mobile Add an article
the invention
an invention
phones
can save people's life wheneve
they face any devasting problem in their life.
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whenever
On the other hand
, negative
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the negative
effects
of using cell
phones
to answer work
and home related
calls can not be ignored because it has harmful Add a hyphen
home-related
effects
on health. To elaborate it
, calls at Correct pronoun usage
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the
night Correct article usage
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time
can create disturbance in sleep that leads to catastrophic consequences on people's health owing to the
less and low quality sleep. Correct article usage
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For instance
, a survey conducted in Greece in 2017 cleared that mobile phone calls distrupt
the concentration on studies and any Correct your spelling
disrupt
work
that leads to increase
the reason of low productivity and less interest in Correct article usage
an increase
work
. Thus
, this
evidence proves that portability
of mobile calls affect the precious Correct article usage
the portability
time
that time
should be utilize
for Change the verb form
be utilized
work
.
In conclusion, although
calls via cell
phones
invent many opportunities for masses
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the masses
but
according Remove the conjunction
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to
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in
destructive
development of mobile calls Correct article usage
the destructive
overwieght
the constructive development due to the diseases like sleep disorders and less concentration.Correct your spelling
overweight
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