There are many benefits to a good education. Therefore, a university education should be offered to all students, not just students with good high school grades. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed that
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tertiary
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should be free for all
students
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because it
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nurtures
their future opportunities, in terms of job searching, qualifications, and so on.
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it sounds perfect, I disagree with the statement
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of some downsides
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it
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explain the reasons in the following paragraph.
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with, the funds invested
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free tertiary
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could be used for other imminent issues in society. To be
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, there are many problems
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as diseases and poverty that we have to solve immediately.
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, in order to alleviate the issues, the government needs sufficient money to deal with the problems constantly and provide
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to the people, which play important roles in bettering the situation.
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, allocating funds to
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free
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is regarded as wasting resources.
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, when
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university
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free, it will bring out unsatisfactory achievements in
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study
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. In detail, there are some
students
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who are not willing to
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further
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or not interested in the major they
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,
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, they just keep it up because it is free.
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, a student who gets to university for free with poor grades would likely
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be absent the school and get bad results.
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,
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mindset will cause irresponsibility
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their
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so that their level of performance will be decreased. In
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respect, making tertiary
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free for everyone is not
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investment
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society. In conclusion, it is undeniable that university
education
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provides numerous opportunities for
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,
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, making it free for all
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will bring out downsides
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society.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • equality
  • social mobility
  • diverse backgrounds
  • life prospects
  • access to education
  • academic performance
  • capabilities
  • preparatory programs
  • transition smoothly
  • higher education
  • lifelong learning
  • job market
  • indicators of abilities
  • motivation
  • passion
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