Many people believe money is a very important factor for achieving happiness others however believe that money has nothing to do with happiness. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Money

brings joy to people’s lives in many ways. It depends upon a personal choice.

However

, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that they can spend wealth on their personal enhancement

while

others perceive that more ways to spend it.

This

essay will discuss both views in detail and provide my opinion. Apparently, there are

a

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several reasons that make a section of society advocate that spending their hard earn on personal grooming will enhance their personality.

Additionally

, they perceive present trend can be followed by good dressing sense and high-priced beauty products. They believe that, if they will not

use

beauty products, they are called outdated.

For instance

, many actresses spend huge amounts on their garments,

cosmetics

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and cosmetics

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to show their status.

Furthermore

,

mostly

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most

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Indian women have brown skin. It’s a

god

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good

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gift

then

also

they purchased costly cosmetics which has no

use

and are full of chemicals. More negative effects than positive.

On the other hand

, one group of people believe that there are many other sources where can they spend

money

. Will

money

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be used only for personal

use

and happiness

.

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Definitely not. These persons think that if they

will

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help and support more will get more satisfaction and self-reliance.

Secondly

, serving NGOs and donating to the needy will bring lots of joy. Food can be distributed to the poor by wealthy people. It’s other ways to invest hard

earning

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to earn

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salary

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a salary

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.

Thirdly

, simple living and high thinking

is

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the

slogan

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slogans

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for

this

kind of persona.

For example

, Ratan Tata is a well-renowned industrialist. But his prime quality is to help others.

Besides

that, during

covid

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COVID-19

time film

actor

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has

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shown that he is a real

hero

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heroes

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for the public by helping them. There are immense individuals who choose to contribute their pay to charity

than

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rather than

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self-personality grooming.

To conclude

, both have importance

according to

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the situations

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situations

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. We should wisely

use

hard earn

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hard-earned

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money

. Either

one

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side will have a detrimental effect. We can make a balance between self-care and

need

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help.