When cars and cyclists use the same roads, there are often problems. Why is this the case? What are the solutions?

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are both essential and often used as

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of transportation nowadays.

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essay will discuss two main causes and possible solutions. On the one hand,

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are prone to accidents most of the time when they used roads

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cars

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because given that bicycles are lighter than

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there is a tendency they will be out of balance when fast

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through them.

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, during traffic

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cyclists

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intended to overtake

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narrow spaces between

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that sometimes they never noticed.

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way, a lot of

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end up having an accident

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the road because of

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. Most drivers

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the bicycles

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their front that's why

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happen.

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, the possible solution is to share the road and create a space exclusive for

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a bicycle

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. With

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, we can avoid

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to happen.

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, the cyclist and car drivers should educate themselves to be responsible enough be aware on their surrounding at all times. Pandemic

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us a lot of challenges. Most people lost their earnings that's why the possible solution to them to go for work is to use

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the bicycle

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because they can

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money for gas. To conclude, it is possible for

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and

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to share the same roads as long as they are independent with their actions. We only live once. We need to value our lives because a lot of our families are waiting for us to come home safe.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

248 words

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