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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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These days living independently is becoming more common in many countries. In my opinion,
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 idea of staying independent is extremely helpful for one's future personality development and a better career.
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 who do not live with family become more responsible. They perform all their task and routine work by themselves and
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 way they learn how to organise their day in advance to fulfil all their task.
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, if
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 stay with family members in the same house they share all the responsibilities and household chores and in
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 sometimes
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 ignore the duties as they think that the work will be done by another member.
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, adolescents living with parents in India do not care about the expenses of the house until they have to manage their own expenses.
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 turn out to be more productive. Because as a person live alone he/she can make use of their spare time in learning new activities or exploring their hobbies.
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, a study done on university students showed that almost sixty per cent of students changed their interest in the field after investing their leisure time in exploring their hobbies. In conclusion, a lot of
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 selecting to live on their own nowadays which is definitely an optimistic evolution. Because it makes
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 understand their responsibilities by performing their task by themselves and
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 make them more productive and creative as they can use their pastime in learning the other activities.
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