Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

In recent years around the world,
people
are moving towards Ayurvedic
medication
rather than clinically approved drugs suggest by authorized doctors or pharmacists.
Although
, the
nature
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remedy may not be too dangerous but not advisable due to insufficient testing methods. I strongly believe every individual health issue is supposed to cure by clinically approved
medication
to avoid risk factors.
Firstly
, to introduce a new drug or vaccine by a medical research team follow different stages of validation to prove it is suitable for all ages and
also
to make no side effects. After completion
this
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stage they send all followed procedures to seek
an
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approval from the world health organization department.
For example
, to boost up our body immunity system to prevent Covid-19 disease the medical research teams throughout the world send multiple stages of validation on various conditions and
finally
approved vaccine given to humans.
This
whole process proves the clinically approved vaccine has very minimal failure reactions. On other hand, natural
medication
prepared by using natural leaves and seeds from the ground advertise to cure diseases like COVID-19 without authorized steps leads to side effects.
Such
cases are reported in rural areas where local
people
believe the milk drops from scientific plants consume through eyes will kill diseases. The above
medication
shows good results in few
people
.
However
, there
was
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fifty percentage
people
who
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experienced a reduction in their eyesight. In conclusion, with respect to the above
argument
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the
medication
supposed to be follow approved procedures and it supposed to be prescribed by authorized doctors. The alternative of authorized
medication
may lead to unnecessary medical problems.
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