Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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In recent years around the world,

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are moving towards Ayurvedic

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rather than clinically approved drugs suggest by authorized doctors or pharmacists.

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remedy may not be too dangerous but not advisable due to insufficient testing methods. I strongly believe every individual health issue is supposed to cure by clinically approved

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to avoid risk factors.

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, to introduce a new drug or vaccine by a medical research team follow different stages of validation to prove it is suitable for all ages and

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to make no side effects. After completion

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approval from the world health organization department.

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, to boost up our body immunity system to prevent Covid-19 disease the medical research teams throughout the world send multiple stages of validation on various conditions and

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approved vaccine given to humans.

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whole process proves the clinically approved vaccine has very minimal failure reactions. On other hand, natural

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prepared by using natural leaves and seeds from the ground advertise to cure diseases like COVID-19 without authorized steps leads to side effects.

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cases are reported in rural areas where local

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believe the milk drops from scientific plants consume through eyes will kill diseases. The above

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shows good results in few

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fifty percentage

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experienced a reduction in their eyesight. In conclusion, with respect to the above

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the

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supposed to be follow approved procedures and it supposed to be prescribed by authorized doctors. The alternative of authorized

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may lead to unnecessary medical problems.

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