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Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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In
this
 day and age playing with a digital device
such
 as
smartphones
 became a major leisure activity among
people
. The reason is its easy accessibility to
friends
 which make a person always busy (not to be alone) and
also
 various type of application in any background. In my perspective, the advantages of
this
 outweigh its disadvantage. On the one hand, being in touch with
friends
 in the busy
life
 and work today is so hard as everyone's
time
 occupied with working in big and crowded cities so most of their
time
 will spend at work and with commit. So that,
smartphones
 became a device to communicate online with
friends
.
for instance
, the research shows that recently the majority of
people
 in the world use
smartphones
 as communication tools.
In addition
, there is numerous software in
smartphones
 in any field which individuals can utilise .
in other words
, the public can use the digital phone as a tool in any part of their
life
, as an example, in the educational ground that there are lots of online courses for boost themself to any degree and
also
 to improve their public knowledge just with some easy type and press.
On the other hand
, nowadays
life
 became
such
 a sticking situation which
people
 do not have
time
 to do all of their work and
also
 have
time
 to have fun as
life
 is so hard. so, the digital devices make situation some kind for
people
 to have balance in
life
 and fun.
for instance
, individuals can chat and talk with their
friends
 and their family member easily. To conclude, at the present
time
people
 have changed their pleasure activity to
paly
Correct your spelling
play
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 with their smartphone,
this
 is because individuals see it as a convenient and accessible way to communicate and have fun with its vary software. I think
this
 has a positive effect on their way of
life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • screen time
  • digital addiction
  • instant gratification
  • multifunctional
  • connectivity
  • social networking
  • online services
  • self-expression
  • entertainment options
  • instant access
  • educational resources
  • communication tools
  • virtual interactions
  • distracted living
  • technological dependence
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