An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.

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statement, An ailing
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access
for
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a doctor's
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history
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treating
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similar disease.
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will help
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patient
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the patient
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to decide whether the
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is
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suitable
or not. The
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health is the most important for
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patient's
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family and oneself. The
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must have
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confidence and trust
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; who is treating the deadly disease.
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Providing
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records
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of the
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will really help patients to have
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on
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doctor
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's and treatmentement;
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will
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help
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patient
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pyschologically
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psychologically
and will
attibute
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attribute
to patients recovery. Suppose the
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have
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cancer and he wants to treat it by
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doctor
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he knows, he has plenty of options. He checks all the
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's previous
records
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and
choose
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the best
doctor
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from the list, The
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's
records
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will not only help him to do the treatment from that
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but
also
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gain
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understanding
that his disease will get cured soon, and
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thinking is very good. While
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treatment
is in progress, the
doctor
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povides
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provides
medications and certain
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to follow like what to eat and
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some homely
excersices
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exercises
(if needed) and many other precautions. If
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patient
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the patient
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has
faith
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on
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the doctor
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and he knows that
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is good
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he will
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follow all these
rules
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by encouraging himself and take medicines in
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manner. The
patient
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may
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find some other activities or homely
tretments
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treatments
treatment
to boost recovery after discussing it with
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doctor
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the doctor
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. While on
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side if
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patient
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does not know about the
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and don't have
faith
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on
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doctor
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the doctor
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then
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sometime
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sometimes
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similar
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will haunt
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patient
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and he will struggle to follow these similar
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and will not take medicine in
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manner. In some worst
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patients
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to hate
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and have doubts against
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's treatments, some might think
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doctor
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the doctor
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is trying to deceive them for money. To
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Conclude
, The
patinet
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patient
gets
faith
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over
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doctor
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the doctor
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and
pyschological
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psychological
understaning
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understanding
that he/she is in good hands after checking the
dcotor's
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doctor's
records
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treating similar diseases while
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patient
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a patient
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who does not have access to it has
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a disadvantage
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