You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend and need some help organizing it. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: Explain why you are writing. Give details about the party. Suggest how your friend can help.

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Dear Ruchin, I hope

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letter finds you well. It was a great time that we spent at your home

last

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weekend. The purpose of writing

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letter is to seek some help from you to organize a surprise birthday party for one of my friends, as he is coming

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back home after five years from Canada. His name is Yash and he is

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kind of person who loves to eat various types of cuisines.

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that, I would like to arrange a party which has different kinds of street food stalls.

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the decoration will be on game arcade theme because of his interest in gaming.

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, the business of your father in the event management field will help me to organize everything

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needed requirements.

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that,

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would be grateful

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if you

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allow me to arrange

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party at your beautiful farmhouse. I hope all

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information will be beneficial to you for my help. Warm regards, Dhruvi Patel

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task achievement

Provide more specific details about the date and time of the party, and if there is a dress code.

coherence cohesion

Organize the letter in a clearer sequence by first explaining the purpose, then the details, and lastly how the friend can help.

suitable writing tone

The letter maintains a clear and friendly tone that is suitable for writing to a friend.

logical structure

There is a logical flow in the organization, and all parts of the task are addressed.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing are effectively used to give a personal touch and maintain a friendly tone.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

171 words

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You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend and need some help organizing it. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: Explain why you are writing. Give details about the party. Suggest how your friend can help.

Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working on charity, teaching sport to younger people) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People used to live in the same city throughout their lives, but now they change where they live several times. What is the cause? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?