the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliance
The graphs show the increase in the percentage of
households
with electrical appliances (washing Use synonyms
machines
, Use synonyms
refrigerators
and Use synonyms
vacuum
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cleaners
) and the decrease in the amount of time doing chores from 1920 to 2019.
In 1920, the proportion of Use synonyms
households
with washing Use synonyms
machines
stood at 40%, which was 10% higher than Use synonyms
households
with Use synonyms
refrigerators
and nearly 38% higher than Use synonyms
households
with Use synonyms
vacuum
Use synonyms
cleaners
. Compared to the steady increase in usage of Use synonyms
vacuum
Use synonyms
cleaners
from 1920 to 1060, the percentage of Use synonyms
refrigerators
indicated dramatically jump during the same period. Use synonyms
However
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while
the figures for Linking Words
refrigerators
and Use synonyms
vacuum
Use synonyms
cleaners
grew to about 100% in 1980 and remained unchanged until 2019, the figure for washing Use synonyms
machines
experienced fluctuation from 1940 to 1980, gradually rising to 68% in 2019.
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Along with
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overall
increasing trend of home electrical appliances throughout the given period, the number of housework hours has been gradually reduced from 50 hours per week to 10 hours per week, nearly five times lesser than the year in 1920.
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Overall
, the rising percentage of Linking Words
households
owning washing Use synonyms
machines
, Use synonyms
refrigerators
and Use synonyms
vacuum
Use synonyms
cleaners
has helped families to save more time to Use synonyms
do
chores in Wrong verb form
doing
this
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