The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps depict how the transit accessibility of a
city
hospital has altered from 2007 to 2010.
Overall
, the three-year period saw changes
to
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the
to the
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road
layout. The salient features of
this
alteration are the addition of two roundabouts, public parking facilities and a
bus
station.
According to
the map of 2010, access to the
city
hospital
were
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still via the same roads, namely
City
Road
, Hospital
Road
and Ring
Road
;
however
, by 2010, two roundabouts had been built at the junctions shown in the map of 2007, which necessitated the removal of
bus
stops located on
the
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both sides of Hospital
Road
.
As a result
of the demolition of those
bus
stops, a
bus
station was erected on the
west-side
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of Hospital
Road
, with access to
this
being through (
the
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)both roundabouts. The
further
additional feature is the car park on the
right-hand
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of the Hospital
Road
, which was for both public and the
city
hospital’s workforce, was separated into two different car parks for each of them, with the one for
public
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being moved to the right of the
city
hospital, and with the other one remained in the same place.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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