News editors decide that to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

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Today, as we might be aware most of the
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provided by newspapers, television, social media or even radio mostly contained negative
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, namely, corruption, war, killing, rape or pandemic. Basically, the
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editors of media companies are responsible to decide whether or not
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should be published publicly. Most of the time, the
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will decide based on the substance of the
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, engagement level and the market needs by the editors.
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, I am of the opinion that bad or negative
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is not always bad.
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, the good
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is not always good as well. Generally, it is undeniable that bad
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provides a bad influence on the public. Most of the time, we react negatively in responding to the bad
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.
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, we become easily hate each other and split the community.
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, even though most of the time we have seen much bad
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rather than good
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does not mean we have become used to negative
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. It is simply because negative
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engages more public attention rather than positive
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bad
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is more often broadcasted. The bad
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is not always bad because it warns other
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to become more careful and can take preventive measures to avoid it.
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, every day the
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provides information on the calculation of
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infected with the virus COVID-19 and died. It is considered a warning for other
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to stay at home, apply social distancing and take any kind of measure to mitigate
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infection.
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good
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may cheer our day it may create an illusion and make us pretend nothing bad had happened. As the result, we become the victim. Based on the foregoing, we can conclude that as long as the bad
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raises higher public attention than good
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it will be chosen by
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editors to be broadcasted. Even though bad
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may create a negative influence on
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personally or publicly, but it is still needed.
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it is our responsibility to control ourselves in responding to the negative
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Engagement
  • Relevance
  • Urgency
  • Natural disasters
  • Political upheavals
  • Public health concerns
  • Advertising revenue
  • Sponsorship deals
  • Market competition
  • Editorial policies
  • Censorship
  • Newsworthy
  • Desensitization
  • Bad news fatigue
  • Negativity bias
  • Balanced view
  • Social media
  • Viral content
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