1. Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain • Why you are writing to them • Why you think insurance should not be increased • What you want them to do

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction

about

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the decision you have taken recently regarding the increment in monthly premium payment. I am a customer of your insurance company for three years and already I am paying a higher premium every month. On top of ,that you have increased 10% additional charges. It is evident that due to Covid many people have lost their job. I am

also

one of them and struggling to pay my previous car instalment.

Moreover

, it will be

overburden

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for me.I enquired, other insurance companies are still charging same. An additional amount is not increased by them. I would really appreciate

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if you mail me the reason for extra charging and explain everything. As I already mentioned that I am a loyal customer for three years and I have never complained. If I am not satisfied with your explanation,

then

need to take some decision. It will be better for me to select those companies that did not increase the price. Looking forward to receiving your reply, Yours faithfully, Namita

Submitted by namita.sinha25 on Sat Sep 04 2021

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