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Many believe that young people should spend more of their time with their family instead of other entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #time #entertainment
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 of entertainment options available around, youngsters tend to align towards these activities
instead
 of spending
time
 with their families. People hold conflicting views when it comes to choosing one of them. In my mind, teenagers should allocate more of their
time
 to family. The primary advantage is that it aids in strengthening family bonds with their kith and kin. Nowadays, everyone is occupied in their professional life leaving no
time
 for their parents and siblings.
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, despite having
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 schedule, I make sure that I have the
last
 meal of
day
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 with my family and enjoy some quality
time
 with them.
This
 in turn helps in creating memories for
lifetime
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 and
thus
 reduces stress. Another worth considering reason is that spending significant
time
 with family teaches interpersonal skills including healthy and constructive ways to discuss a problem and come up with
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. To exemplify, whenever I am in
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doubt or conflict, I approach my family members and take their suggestions.
As a result
, we work together to solve the issue. In conclusion, with all these incredible benefits, I agree that spending
time
 with family is more meaningful than investing in
entertainments
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 and celebrations.
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