Some people believe that it is ok to put the needs of humans over environmental concerns. While others feel that protecting the environment should be prioritized. Discuss both views and what is your opinion?

People
have different views as to whether to
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personal needs before thinking of
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environment
enviroment
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or to have
enviromental
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environmental
protection as the prioritized
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. In my opinion,
although
there are several reasons
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having
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on personal needs before
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the environment
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, I firmly believe that it brings about much more benefits to think of environmental protection before
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human desires. On the one hand, there are several reasons why
people
would think of their needs before environmental problems.
Firstly
, it is much
more
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easier in daily life. One of the most harmful to
environment
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is the
plastic
usage which is part of everyday use from households to businesses.
For example
, when we order foods delivery, we could just only eat from the
plastic
container and don't need to clean anything.
Secondly
, it is extremely
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for everyone.
For instance
, if it is
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very hot day,
people
will just turn on the air conditioner and enjoy
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atmosphere
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instead
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in stead
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of keeping up with the sweats and bad moods.
On the other hand
, while some
people
have less concern on the
enviroment
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environment
, there are a number of reasons why we could have the
enviroment
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environment
environmental
impacts as the
first
list. While
people
enjoy their AC in the home or using
plastic
without any concerns,
the
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climate changes occur severely in every
parts
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of the world. We could face
the
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drastic temperature changes as
nowsday
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nowadays
Newsday
nowaday
is far hotter than before.
Moreover
, air
polution
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pollution
is getting worst all over the world.
For instance
, in Thailand, it is required
people
to
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wear masks outdoor and to have air purifiers in each home
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this
year as the new norm. We could not reject that despite the fact that the
environment
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problems are changing everyone routine and it does impact to
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single level; from
micro
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microplastic
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plastic
in the ocean to worsen the way of
people
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life
lives
lifes
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lives
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.
Hence
, the environmental
protections
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protection
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is really an A list for everyone to concern
.
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In conclusion, it seems to me that the effects of
enviroment
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environmental
environment
issues
are far outweigh
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the
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human needs without any concern
to
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the impacts.
Hence
,
people
should consider
enviromental
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environmental
protection before their owns desires.
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