You recently joined a new fitness center and have been attending various classes. Write a letter to the fitness center manager to express your thoughts, experiences, and suggestions.
Dear Mr. Lambert,
I am one of the members of your
sport
club and I am writing Change the noun form
sports
this
letter to share my experience about
the courses that I have Change preposition
with
done
. Actually, I have some Verb problem
taken
recommendation
that may be functional for the improvement of your Fix the agreement mistake
recommendations
center
.
I attended to TRX course Change the spelling
centre
last
month and I really liked the atmosphere of the class; the trainer was truly an expert in his job, and he knew how to communicate and motivate every single person. However
, the area that had been considered for the sessions was extremely wide, the air was not acceptable, and the air conditioner was not working really well; I think it will
be betterWrong verb form
would
,
if we could have fresh air.
Remove the comma
apply
In addition
, the quality of the Sports equipment are
perfect, but they are not managed. In my opinion, it Change the verb form
is
will
be great if a person could take control over items Wrong verb form
would
such
as lockers, keys, and sports sets; in this
way, they will not break or loose
.
I have a strong tendency to continue my routine exercises in your Correct your spelling
lose
center
, and I keenly regard your response.
Respectfully,
Ghazaleh ShadmanChange the spelling
centre
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coherence cohesion
Consider ensuring that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity. For instance, separate the issues with the TRX course area and the air quality into distinct paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
While the letter is mostly clear and informative, structuring it with more distinct paragraphs can further enhance readability and coherence. Try beginning a new paragraph for each main point or suggestion.
task achievement
The letter effectively addresses the task by providing both experiences and suggestions, ensuring a complete response.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and respectful, making it suitable for formal communication.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,