Most people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family at the same time. What problems can this situation create? What are the possible solutions?
Nowadays many
people
try to have a better family life
while they are maintaining a successful work
life
. Even though it is better to try to balance both work
and family life
, this
has caused some problems
for them. In this
essay, I will discuss these problems
and possible solutions
to overcome those issues
.
To begin
with, it is irrefutable this
situation in which people
try to balance both career and life
has caused several issues
. One of those problems
is, people
try to become successful in their career without spending some time
on work
-related education for which they do not have time
as they spend their free time
with family. For instance
, if individual works in the IT sector, then
during free time
, the person should keep learning new technologies that arise in the future as those help to become successful in work
. Another problem is, even though people
work
hard to keep good family life
and job, they do not care about personal health. To illustrate, since most individuals spend their full time
balancing work
-family life
, they would not spend any minute to maintain a healthy life
by doing exercises or meditation. These are the problems
that cause when a person strives to become successful in both family and work
life
.
However
, there are possible solutions
to ameliorate these issues
. One of the solutions
is, employers should allow their employees to work
only for 8 hours which includes 1 hour of training that would help to improve their knowledge. Since it is undeniable that people
should not spend additional time
outside the office to do work
-related studies as they should spend those time
with their family, the best approach is to include 1-hour of training within office hours so that employees could learn while they are achieving work
goals. Another solution is, it is important that people
should focus on personal health while they try to maintain a balanced work
-family life
. For example
, after work
or before work
, they can spend some time
in a gym or jogging which would help to improve their health.
In summary, while people
strive to have a better career, they try to have a happy life
same time
. Even though it is important to have such
balanced life
, this
situation has caused many problems
for them. In this
essay, I have discussed those problems
and possible solutions
to ameliorate the issues
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