In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Globally, the number of
people
moving to
cities
from rural areas is on the rise. I believe that
this
will have a negative impact on the
environment
and hospital waiting
times
.
Firstly
, the
environment
will be impacted by high levels of traffic. If more
people
move to
cities
, there will be a rise in cars, buses and trains to accommodate a growing population. The gases emitted from cars and other forms of transport will lead to increased pollution and greenhouse gases.
For instance
, China is the leading country with the highest carbon emissions
due to
heavy traffic and a high number of
people
living in
cities
. Despite
this
, China introduced policies to curb greenhouse gases by reducing traffic, but high levels of pollution continued to persist.
Hence
, moving from the countryside seems to be a bad idea for the
environment
.
Secondly
, I believe that hospitals will be overwhelmed by the sheer number of
people
moving to
cities
.
This
would lead to longer waiting
times
due to
high patient demand and lack of resources.
For instance
, the waiting
times
for routine hip surgery in the UK have increased rapidly for the past 10 years
due to
patients moving from the countryside.
This
is why migration to metropolitan areas seems to be a disastrous idea as the health of
people
will be affected.
Finally
, the crime rate will significantly increase because police resources will be overstretched.
To conclude
, I believe that migrating to
cities
from rural areas will have a negative impact on the
environment
and hospital waiting
times
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rural-to-urban migration
  • population shift
  • positive impact
  • negative impact
  • urbanization
  • job opportunities
  • access to education
  • access to healthcare
  • urban infrastructure
  • rural traditions
  • cultural heritage
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