In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
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, I believe that hospitals will be overwhelmed by the sheer number of Linking Words
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Finally
, the crime rate will significantly increase because police resources will be overstretched.
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