Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Few people think that the most important issue regarding the
environment
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of their rime is the decline of particular species of
plants
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and
animals
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whereas others believe that apart from
plants
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and
animals
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, there are more
problems
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worth noting. In my opinion, there are
problems
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which are more important than
plants
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and
animals
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which are often overlooked by us.
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, the main reason behind
deterioration
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the deterioration
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of
plants
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and
animals
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is the problem in the entire
food
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chain. There’s an increase in the number of herbivores like deers who often feed upon
plants
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for their
food
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and the carnivorous
animals
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are decreasing day by day due to hunting. There aren’t enough carnivores like tigers or leopards who could feed upon the herbivores for
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.
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, herbivores increase drastically in their numbers affecting the number of
plants
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and thereby the entire
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chain.
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causes
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in both in
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a number
the number
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of
plants
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and
animals
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affecting the
environment
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. Apart from the
plants
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and
animals
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, there are
problems
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that are missed out by us and it affects the whole
environment
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. These could be fluctuations in the climate temperatures because of global warming causing the glaciers to melt. Even human beings are affected due to hot climate causing various skin diseases and burns. Another crucial problem, if not noted soon may cause a bad
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environment
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the environment
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is the
increase
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use of plastics for various purposes like
food
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packaging etc. As we all know, plastic is non-biodegradable and if dumped into the ground with an intention of eliminating it, may cause soil pollution.
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could affect the growth of the new plant species. To conclude, I believe that there are more crucial
problems
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that are affecting the
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apart from
loss
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the loss
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of
plants
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and
animals
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. These are global warming causing
rise
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a rise
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in temperature and soil pollution affect the soil.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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