Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Few people think that the most important issue regarding the

environment

of their rime is the decline of particular species of

plants

and

animals

whereas others believe that apart from

plants

and

animals

, there are more

problems

worth noting. In my opinion, there are

problems

which are more important than

plants

and

animals

which are often overlooked by us.

Firstly

, the main reason behind

deterioration

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the deterioration

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of

plants

and

animals

is the problem in the entire

food

chain. There’s an increase in the number of herbivores like deers who often feed upon

plants

for their

food

and the carnivorous

animals

are decreasing day by day due to hunting. There aren’t enough carnivores like tigers or leopards who could feed upon the herbivores for

food

.

As a result

, herbivores increase drastically in their numbers affecting the number of

plants

and thereby the entire

food

chain.

This

causes

decrease

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a decrease

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in both in

number

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a number

the number

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of

plants

and

animals

affecting the

environment

. Apart from the

plants

and

animals

, there are

problems

that are missed out by us and it affects the whole

environment

. These could be fluctuations in the climate temperatures because of global warming causing the glaciers to melt. Even human beings are affected due to hot climate causing various skin diseases and burns. Another crucial problem, if not noted soon may cause a bad

effect

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affect

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on

environment

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the environment

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is the

increase

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use of plastics for various purposes like

food

packaging etc. As we all know, plastic is non-biodegradable and if dumped into the ground with an intention of eliminating it, may cause soil pollution.

This

could affect the growth of the new plant species. To conclude, I believe that there are more crucial

problems

that are affecting the

environment

apart from

loss

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the loss

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of

plants

and

animals

. These are global warming causing

rise

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a rise

the rise

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in temperature and soil pollution affect the soil.