More and more business as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

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With the steady advance in
communication
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technology, many companies and individuals are using it for their daily interaction. Modern
communication
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systems have provided many positives
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as flexibility in
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of
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and location,
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, it has its own negatives
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as distraction and losing human identity.
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essay will discuss the pros and cons
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using it as a replacement for face-to-face
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. One advantage
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using information technology is the ability to concur
geographic
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with geographic
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boundaries.
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, a person sitting in Damascus can immediately contact his Chinese vendor via email or WhatsApp. The same
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on companies,
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when using online meeting tools for setting up a meeting with
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from different geographic location.
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reduce
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the overhead resulting
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travel expenses and attendee’s
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availability.
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, there is no doubt that technology has bridged the geographic gap among
people
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across the globe.
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, it can be easy to get distracted
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when using
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the online-chatting
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online-chatting
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online chatting
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platform
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platforms
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and all
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forms
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of social media
network
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networks
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.
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, the most recent surveys have proofed that
people
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who spend their
time
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on WhatsApp and
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…etc., are by far less efficient than the ones who don’t. another drawback is to lose the human factor during the conversation and relying more on emoji and stickers
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of
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,
this
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can be
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misunderstood
easily and will damage human interactions
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time
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. To conclude,
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advance
communication
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tools
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provided
more
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convenient method of interaction and closed the boundaries among
people
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across the universe, there are numerous disadvantages as well
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when it is used extensively. the mode of
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needs to be picked carefully considering several factors
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as distance and
time
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