In some countries, owning a house rather than renting one is very important for people. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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The importance of having a personal
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over a rented apartment has been a topic for debate in some nations. In
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essay, I will be discussing the reason for
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, the positive effects of owning a
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. On the one hand, one of the reasons why I think people attach importance to personal houses is because it is a guaranteed shelter for the individual. Living in a rented flat cannot give a person the hundred per cent guarantee for shelter and
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because the owner of the building can decide to do whatever he wants with it anytime he wants to and
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, ask the person to move out from the
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making the tenant unsettled.
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, a friend of mine recently bought a compound and decided to renovate the building.
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, he issued a quit notice to all the residing tenants, as
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, these residents were forced to obtain another place leaving them unsettled.
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, the positive effect of owning a home is that it not only gives liberty to the owner but a feeling of satisfaction. Some people feel satisfied when they are in their own houses and
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have the freedom to do
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they wish with their property
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as, renovations, making a garden and a playground for their children.
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, my sister and her husband renovate their duplex almost all the time.
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, they put up a small demarcation outside the
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for an animal farm that they would not have been able to do if they were renting the place. To conclude,
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owning an apartment
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of renting is very important in some nations because it gives an individual guarantee for shelter, I believe that it is a positive situation because it gives owners a sense of satisfaction and liberty.
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