Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is always said parents should motivate their youngster to do something together in a structured way during their free time. Some people hold the view that kids should be persuaded to do their actions solely. From my point of view,
however
, kids should learn to work in a band.
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, they may learn from each other how to apply their social disorders like some misbehaviours, discipline problems, delinquency, bullying, aggression and so on to defenestrate their power. That's why working in a group during free time is not recommended.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite