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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The involvement of the computers takes place in the study significantly,
as a result
, teachers will disappear from the classroom in future. Overall, there is no doubt that machines ease the educational techniques in an academic world and the role of the tutor is declining nowadays,
however
, without teachers it is impossible to believe the education system will stand,
moreover
, according to an official survey by the oxford university, 70% students use electronic gadgets in order to study. At
first
, the computer is a revolution in the field of education which make the pattern and learning style so easy. It has many advantages
such
 as – easy to carry and store documents, study material and research projects, make diagrams or presentations on different tools, using the internet for learning.
this
 type of activity promotes the usage of instruments on a large scale in higher education
that is
 the main reason for decreasing number of tutors globally.
also
, we are dealing with the pandemic situation from covid in the
last
 two years so it is impossible to grasp the knowledge in the classroom as the whole world is a lockdown.
Second
, teachers play the most important role in the system of acquiring information since the beginning,
nevertheless
, it is true that computers affected the society of instructors but up to a level. these days educators are teaching online via YouTube, Facebook and zoom online tools and they have millions of views and thousands of subscribers to their videos and channels and share the glimpse of their knowledge and earning a good income by these platforms. In my opinion, the computer and other electronic instruments are helpful in studies,
nonetheless
, they need organisers as well.
further
, we can search and downloads loads of theories and educational stuff but the teacher is the one who can explain
this
 in a better way.
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