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some people believe that learning a foreign language is a difficult task .what are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language .what is the best way to overcome them. explain and include your personal experience or knowledge of this problem.

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Introduction
In various nations around the world, many people agree that learning a foreign
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 in primary
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 is beneficial as compared with secondary
children
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. Learning a
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language
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 is better no harm for the
children
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 in the future. While there is clearly a drawback to
this
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, I personally believe that the benefits are more significant.
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The disadvantage of learning a
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second
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language
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 in secondary
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 is they might have confusion about the dialect.
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 is because ,in secondary school, there is a lot of important information, data, research to be input in their daily school life, by learning an additional
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 will give a burden for them.
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, they might not perform well in another subject.
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On the other hand
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, one of the major advantages is that at primary
children
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, there are easy to receive the information due to their brain still being fresh to receive the information.
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, during primary school, there are few subjects to be learned and the level is very low for them to adapt.
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, they are easy to catch up with the
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second
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language
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.
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In addition
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 to that, learning a
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second
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language
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 will be useful in the future ,
for example
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, Korean
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, Japanese
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 and many more. Young
children
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 learn a
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second
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language
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 will be useful for them whoever work or travel to a foreign
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.
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, they will not be
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 to speak the
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.
Conclusion
In conclusion,
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 believe the advantages are of greater significance than the disadvantage.
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a
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secondary students cannot corp with it,
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 a
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second
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language
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 will be useful in future

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Phonetics
  • Syntax
  • Conjugation
  • Idiomatic expressions
  • Cognates
  • Immersion
  • Fluency
  • Pedagogy
  • Linguistic competence
  • Mnemonics
  • Language acquisition
  • Pronunciation drills
  • Conversation partners
  • Language barrier
  • Bilingualism
  • Multilingualism
  • Accent reduction
  • Comprehension
  • Language proficiency
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