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Band 3

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat

#neighbours #noise #houseflat
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my concerns over
noise
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 pollution being created by the renovation works at the
library
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. I am a resident of
HSR
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the HSR
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 Housing Society which is
next
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 to the
library
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. Let me explain the situation in more detail. I am delighted that the council has decided to renovate the community
library
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.
However
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,
machinery
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the machinery
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 being used for the renovation is quite old and runs on fuel. These
fuel based
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fuel-based
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 machines produce a lot of
noise
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 and disturb people living in the surrounding areas. My residence is
next
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 to the
library
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 and the impact of the
noise
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 is very high. I would like to recommend the use of modern electronic equipment
instead
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 of
fuel based
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fuel-based
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 machinery. Electronic machinery does not produce much
noise
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 and the decibel levels are very low. So the disturbance to the families staying close to the
library
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 can be averted. I look forward to seeing
this
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 problem fixed. Thank you for your time and support. Yours sincerely XYZ
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