The Internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, a lot of society use the

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to communicate and transfer information to

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. Some

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believe that the

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will decrease our communication and social connection. I totally disagree with

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opinion because online platforms can help

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to socialise and not break off our relationships.

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of all, I believe that the

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helps the population to meet new associations. In the past, If the population wanted to find some new partner, they needed to meet in the real world but now we can join the new company on online platforms.

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, lots of teenagers love to play Instagram and Twitter since they can create groups and invite

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around the world to join their online communities.

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, they usually exchange ideas about traditions in each country and suggest other

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come to their country as well.

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, I find the

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can make

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come together to discuss interesting topics and it feels like a small social group.

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helps

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interact with

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and improve their relationships. Even if the

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seems like isolates us, it cannot reduce our connection and it increases the opportunity to connect easily with other nations.

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, most modern

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prefer to use

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chat or call with their buddy and they find it provides more chances to connect with their colleague.

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, the community can contact

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and make appointments to meet in real places.

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why it can make the public have a chance to meet their friends. In conclusion, I completely disagree that the online connection can make

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feel lonely and cause

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to be far from their social life.

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can create mock communities on online platforms and give public contact with

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Topic Vocabulary:

instantaneous communication
vast distances
maintaining relationships
professional connections
face-to-face meetings
in-person communication skills
local friendships
social isolation
community events
niche interests
like-minded people
virtual relationships
emotional connection
feelings of loneliness
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