In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are spending more and more of their time indoors. What do you think that are the causes of this problem? What measures could best be taken to solve it?

It is undeniable that

children

and

teenagers

at the present in many parts of the globe are often spending a lot of time

to stay

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indoors their

home

rather than outdoors. From my point of view, many causes and solutions to support

this

issue will be outlined in the following paragraph. It is true to say that staying indoor

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home

of many

children

and

teenagers

can be caused by

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positive reasons and

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negative reasons.

For example

, one of the major causes of

this

issue is that the kids have more

activities

which can do inside their

home

,

such

as playing

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computer

game

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Additionally

, they are feeling safe when they stay inside their house because their house is

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place where has many people

who

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they know, and they are feeling

comfort

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when they stay in the

home

.

However

, another view is that they do not want to adapt with many strangers when they go outside, and sometimes they do not like meeting many people in the public. To solve

this

problem, there are several things that everyone can solve

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.

For instance

,

parents

and family should find some outside

activities

that can do with family together, like camping on the holiday vacation,

firstly

.

Secondly

, the psychiatrist consultation is another good way because many

children

and

teenagers

may have many problems in their

mind

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, but they cannot talk with their

parents

due to they think that their

parents

do not understand them. In conclusion, I believe that spending more and more time inside their

home

of

children

and

teenagers

depend on parenting and

surrounding

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environment of their life. If they have good friends or good outside

activities

, they will need to hang out with their friends to do these

activities

.

Therefore

, it is recommended that

parents

should regularly observe the behaviour of their kids.