In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are spending more and more of their time indoors. What do you think that are the causes of this problem? What measures could best be taken to solve it?

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It is undeniable that
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and
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at the present in many parts of the globe are often spending a lot of time
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indoors their
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rather than outdoors. From my point of view, many causes and solutions to support
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issue will be outlined in the following paragraph. It is true to say that staying indoor
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home
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of many
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and
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can be caused by
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positive reasons and
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negative reasons.
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, one of the major causes of
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issue is that the kids have more
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which can do inside their
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,
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as playing
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computer
game
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, they are feeling safe when they stay inside their house because their house is
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place where has many people
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they know, and they are feeling
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when they stay in the
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.
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, another view is that they do not want to adapt with many strangers when they go outside, and sometimes they do not like meeting many people in the public. To solve
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problem, there are several things that everyone can solve
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.
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,
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and family should find some outside
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that can do with family together, like camping on the holiday vacation,
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, the psychiatrist consultation is another good way because many
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and
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may have many problems in their
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, but they cannot talk with their
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due to they think that their
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do not understand them. In conclusion, I believe that spending more and more time inside their
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of
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and
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depend on parenting and
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environment of their life. If they have good friends or good outside
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, they will need to hang out with their friends to do these
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.
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, it is recommended that
parents
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should regularly observe the behaviour of their kids.
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