Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some
people
believe that it is better to avoid Use synonyms
change
and do the same tasks. Use synonyms
However
, others argue that Linking Words
change
will bring several benefits to humankind and will positively impact Use synonyms
people
's lives. In the following paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before a conclusion is reached.
On the one hand, it is widely accepted that living in the comfort zone makes Use synonyms
people
feel safe. Use synonyms
Besides
, avoiding Linking Words
change
does not require effort to do new things. Since, to be the better person or good at something, one has to push a lot of effort to improve oneself. Use synonyms
For example
, to gain new skills Linking Words
such
as presentation skills or communication skills, Linking Words
people
have to practice and improve. Use synonyms
However
, in some aspects, changing does not refer to a positive thing. Linking Words
For instance
, traditional cultures should do the same so that the new generations could learn and understand their ancestors.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, others believe that changing will drive the world and bring us new cutting-technology making our lives more comfortable. Linking Words
For example
, emerging of the internet affects all Linking Words
people
globally, as connecting and interacting with other Use synonyms
people
are convenient. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, more business firms shifted the business from local to global, leading to better services and products. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, sometimes changing could bring a negative impact on businesses. Linking Words
For example
, due to inventing smartphones, Blackberry had to shut down.
In conclusion, both doing the same things and changing have benefits and drawbacks. From my perspective, Linking Words
people
should keep doing the same for traditional cultures while seeking Use synonyms
change
to discover and invent something to promote our lives better.Use synonyms
Submitted by kanokwann.joy on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?