Buying a house is beneficial or rental home is beneficial? Write ur Opinion

In many nations around the world, a great number of

people

think that owning a

house

is beneficial than renting.

However

,

this

incident doesn't apply to

a

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certain

countries

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,

for example

, India, Indonesia and Malaysia.

This

is because the poverty families are in a large number as compared to prosperity families,

thus

the mere choices they have

are

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renting a home. From my perspective, I strongly agree that buying a

house

is greatly beneficial than owning a home. There are two main benefits of buying a

house

.

Firstly

, there is a permanent and secure resident to stay throughout the entire life.

This

is because

people

who have bought a

house

, don't need to move regularly and pay extra rental fees for the unnecessary charges charged by the owner.

For instance

, in Singapore, the majority of the

room

rental is excluded from the utilities, which means that every month they ought to top up extra expenses on the utilities based on their usage.

As a result

,

people

who have bought a

house

don't need to think about these issues monthly.

In addition

,

people

who own a

house

can earn money by renting out the

room

to the public.

This

is supremely common incidents which happen in the well-developed countries, for ,example Europe, the USA and many more. Take Singapore as an example, the employees are from all over the world, to say that, the majority of the

house

owners in Singapore will rent out the empty

room

for the foreigners and from here, they earned the rental fees and at the same time they merely top up the money for the monthly instalment.

On the other hand

, the most enormous drawback of renting a home is the tenants need to tolerate the other roommates as well as the

house

owner.

This

is because tenants will usually be sharing the

room

or the

house

with others, so they must be well-communicated with each other in order to prevent happens in conflict.

As a result

,

people

who are hardly adapt themselves to

such

an environment will face some difficulties to stay longer in a residence. To sum up, I believe buying a

house

and staying together with family are the best things ever as compared to sharing a

room

or

house

with others so that we can have freedom and feel

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comfortable in the

house

.