Buying a house is beneficial or rental home is beneficial? Write ur Opinion

In many nations around the world, a great number of

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think that owning a

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is beneficial than renting.

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,

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incident doesn't apply to

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certain

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,

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, India, Indonesia and Malaysia.

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is because the poverty families are in a large number as compared to prosperity families,

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the mere choices they have

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renting a home. From my perspective, I strongly agree that buying a

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is greatly beneficial than owning a home. There are two main benefits of buying a

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.

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, there is a permanent and secure resident to stay throughout the entire life.

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is because

people

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who have bought a

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, don't need to move regularly and pay extra rental fees for the unnecessary charges charged by the owner.

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, in Singapore, the majority of the

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rental is excluded from the utilities, which means that every month they ought to top up extra expenses on the utilities based on their usage.

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,

people

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who have bought a

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don't need to think about these issues monthly.

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,

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who own a

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can earn money by renting out the

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to the public.

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is supremely common incidents which happen in the well-developed countries, for ,example Europe, the USA and many more. Take Singapore as an example, the employees are from all over the world, to say that, the majority of the

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owners in Singapore will rent out the empty

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for the foreigners and from here, they earned the rental fees and at the same time they merely top up the money for the monthly instalment.

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, the most enormous drawback of renting a home is the tenants need to tolerate the other roommates as well as the

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owner.

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is because tenants will usually be sharing the

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or the

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with others, so they must be well-communicated with each other in order to prevent happens in conflict.

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,

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who are hardly adapt themselves to

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an environment will face some difficulties to stay longer in a residence. To sum up, I believe buying a

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and staying together with family are the best things ever as compared to sharing a

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or

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with others so that we can have freedom and feel

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comfortable in the

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.