At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.

Nowadays, considering certain countries population census there has
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significant change. The number of youths residents climbed more than elders tremendously. In that scenario,
young
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generation supports to
develop
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economic and
health
sector
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sectors
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of the
country
.
However
,
lack
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of senior citizens
cause
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to
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experienced
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labourers. My objective is to
further
discuss the above pros and
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cons
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for
increasing
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amount of youngers than
olders
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holders
older
.
To begin
with, youngers give their whole energy to increase their financial situations and they always pay their attention to find new innovations to the society. They have radical ideas and their work efficiency is affected to improve their industrial areas and small businesses.
For example
, according to
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survey conducted by Harvard University, it has been found that 80% of youngers contributed to
earn
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more income for their companies.
Furthermore
, each and every
country
allocate sufficient money for
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sector.
However
, it may
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as a result
of
this
situation.
Besides
, a lot of older people
oftenly
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often
suffered from at least one chronic
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when they are getting older.
Hence
, governments have to pay
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value in their
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budget
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look after these adults. To illustrates that, according to the researched of
World
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Health
Organization, it has been found that 90% of elders suffering from different chronic diseases and state give to 70% of allowances for them to uplift their life. In conclusion, most
country
's youth population increased rapidly than senior citizens. It may help to improve
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and
health
backgrounds of the
country
.
On the contrary
,
as a result
of
this
progress states have to face some problems in
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future. I believe that
this
situation will have numerous advantages and disadvantages.
However
, among them advantages outweigh disadvantages.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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  • workforce
  • productivity
  • innovation
  • skilled labor
  • social development
  • technology
  • dividend
  • competition
  • resources
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  • unrest
  • instability
  • healthcare
  • elderly care
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