Some people think that certain criminals should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bar. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The sole reason

of

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becoming a miscreant is people being in debt or

envy

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of other person's success or love. While some people believe that

criminals

should be spending their entire life behind

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cell

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,

however

, I, believe that they should be given the opportunity to

work

for

unpaid

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community

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and reflect on their life circumstances.

Firstly

,many

juvenile

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become part of the incident due to the lack of money or

ammenities

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amenities

they desire. These miscreants need to

be introduce

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to behaviour correction programs

in-order

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to become sober. If we put adolescent criminal who has small charges against him in the jail for longer period of time, it will make them more remorse.

Although

, there is a possibility of trying to escape from prison in the name of

community

service

,

but

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i

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argue they can be found easily with the GPS device attached to

the

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each prisoner.To illustrate, many teens have

found

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been found

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guilty of theft,drug dealing and

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shoplifting

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shop lifting

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in the USA, where they need to either do 90 days of the

society

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service

or

put

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into prison for 60 days.

This

totally

depend

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on the nature of

crime

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somebody

accused

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of.

Therefore

, it is not beneficial to put all the

criminals

behind bars and certain should provide guidance to opt for

community

service

.

On the other hand

, non-profit services

also

give chance to request for reduction of the sentence. Many individuals who have committed a crime reduce their jail time by years by doing

community

work

. Even though some people believe

this

is a calculated act by individuals to get bail easily, I would argue it still gives

them

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ability

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to gel with society easily.

For example

, a criminal verdict has

reduced

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from 20 to 11 years since he has done unpaid

work

in the

neighborhood

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.

As a result

, the

community

service

facility is important in the

prejudice

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culture in order to reduce the sentence for

the

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specific

criminals

. To conclude, not only do unpaid

community

services make

criminals

realise their life choices, but it

also

gives them

option

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to decrease the verdict sentence.

Therefore

, I agree certain

criminals

should

made

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work

free of charge for

community

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the community

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instead

of putting them in bars.