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what are the causes of global warming and what measures can government and individuals can take to tackle the issue?

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Generally,In today's period of time global warming is a major problem for
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animals and human beings let us discuss the causes as well as
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 of global warming in subsequent paragraphs. The main cause of global warming is
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the emission
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 of co2 and nitrogen gases in
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 amount due to increasing vehicles for transmission ,to reach quickly at their destination and for more comfort. Another important reason for global warming is deforestation
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 amount of co2 is increasing rapidly because trees
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 the co2 and
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 oxygen maintains the balance of co2 and oxygen in
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,there are several ways to sort or to reduce these problems that are causing global warming.
firstly
 government should implement strict rules to prevent deforestation and
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 should be charged .
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 government should introduce a cheap and convenient way of transmission that denizens reduce the use of private vehicles. To conclude,
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 global warming is a serious issue, there are some steps that
government
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 and individuals can follow and reduce the effects of global warming.
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