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In many situations, people who break the law should be warned instead of punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the rate of crime is escalating. And
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 is because criminals are not getting the punishment they deserve. In my opinion, I firmly believe that people who break the law should be punished
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 of being warned. The essay below elaborately explains my point of view.
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 with, these days we come across very brutal cases on newspapers and televisions. The sole reason for it is offenders are getting away easily with committing horrendous felonies. To illustrate, almost
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 we come across barbaric
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 like rape or acid throwing because these malefactors are not rightly chastised. Malfeasances like these not only ruins a girl's face but
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 her
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. Yet, these folks get imprisonment of seven years or so whereas even the penalization of
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 long imprisonment is not enough for these sins. They can live their normal
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 but a victim can never do that. According to
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recent research,
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 of rapes are increasing worldwide.
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, these wrongdoers deserve severe damnation.
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, the rate of homicides are
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 proliferating and the cause is justice is not rightfully served.
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, we often come across news like the murder of an
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 or cases about the assassination of an entire family. Sometimes they get a
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 long imprisonment but most of the
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 because of factors like age or mental disorder they escape harsh retribution.
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, giving rise to more and more merciless felonies.
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 for offences like these, penalization should be strict and
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certain
 factors should be ignored. To conclude, in order to put a halt
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 heinous malfeasances the law system needs to be more strict. A mentioned earlier in the essay, I hold the view that folks who break the legislation should be chastised
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 of being warned as
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 the only way to dwindle the increasing crime rate.
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